Wrote a pro-american song and wanted some feedback....thanks
link below!1!1!!!
in the song benny stands for america!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5EtYPrsm35g (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5EtYPrsm35g)
Quote from: steve folkster on May 09, 2015, 02:40:43 PM
Wrote a pro-american song and wanted some feedback....thanks
link below!1!1!!!
in the song benny stands for america!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5EtYPrsm35g (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5EtYPrsm35g)
Hmm...
Even with 8.000$ hearing aids I could only hear less the half of your words.
Quote from: steve folkster on May 09, 2015, 02:40:43 PM
Wrote a pro-american song and wanted some feedback....thanks
You're not
too far away from being polished and pertinent. The tune is hook-worthy, but needs some dimensional breathing-space.
Can you elaborate?
Should I create a sequence in between verses?
Benny in the song is a welfare reciever asking god to loan him money. God said such a mentality is for the devil.
Thats the core of the song.
Just that you needed to mike your guitar separately, then blend both recordings on a third unit.