Here is my thoughts on this, I would love feedback!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wq6zEqs-hY4

Too much movement. It looks like you're in a tornado or something.

It would be effective to flash sources at the bottom. It re-enforces your credibility. What kind of post-production skills do you have?

Movement as far as my body motion?

I own a video production company haha kinda wanted to keep it super simple. Still deciding if this is something i should put effort in or not. 

Quote from: taxed on June 20, 2018, 09:08:35 PM
Too much movement. It looks like you're in a tornado or something.

It would be effective to flash sources at the bottom. It re-enforces your credibility. What kind of post-production skills do you have?

Agree. I'd suggest watching Ben Shapiro and how he gets right to the point. Also try more of a head and shoulder shot, watching you wave your hands around so much is distracting.
Speed up the cadence, also know what you want to say, memorize it. Rehearse, rehearse and rehearse some more.

Quote from: Solar on June 20, 2018, 09:26:44 PM
Agree. I'd suggest watching Ben Shapiro and how he gets right to the point. Also try more of a head and shoulder shot, watching you wave your hands around so much is distracting.
Speed up the cadence, also know what you want to say, memorize it. Rehearse, rehearse and rehearse some more.

Exactly.  Until you're a pro, make a focused statement one at a time, then edit out the dead space between. This girl does it the right way I think:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KUL2pI1psSw

Thanks for the responses. I will use those on my next one! 

No Trump isn't responsible, neither is "America" I'll go so far as to say NO ONE IN AMERICA for the past 25 years is Responsible....THE FKG CARTELS ARE RESPONSIBLE, These kids are a "Product" a "Commondity" the cartels and the smugglers and the scumbag Govts of those respective countries who are all OWNED by the same cartels are responsible.

We're just stupid enough not to realize the truth and blaming each other.

We need and all out war on these suckers to get things right....i'm talking drones, air strikes whatever.

I agree i am sure that the cartels use kids, without a doubt but i'm sure not 100% of them. I am a believe that our government doesn't actually want to stop the cartels so that will never happen. 

Quote from: Bradleygreen3 on June 21, 2018, 05:48:22 AM
I agree i am sure that the cartels use kids, without a doubt but i'm sure not 100% of them. I am a believe that our government doesn't actually want to stop the cartels so that will never happen.

It's OK, you can tell it like it is, our traitorous gop'E doesn't like the change, it hurt their crony monied backers.

Quote from: taxed on June 20, 2018, 11:32:29 PM
Exactly.  Until you're a pro, make a focused statement one at a time, then edit out the dead space between. This girl does it the right way I think:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KUL2pI1psSw

I see what you did there, and that get's you the Reagan Cowboy hat for the month.

That aside, I love that woman, she is soo damned smart, and her editing prowess only exemplifies that point. That was a great example!

This whole program is a picture perfect snapshot of the left's dishonest filthy template.

Have basic goals to start with - erase borders; screw up and destroy America; give away America's capital and resources to everybody else.

Step 1 - Pretend that America should absorb every last person on the planet who "feels like coming to America".

Even though it's for purposes of terrorism, jihad, conquest, reconquesta, free stuff, etc......... label every every last person a "refugee fleeing horrors".

Flood every process and activity with "the chilluns"  Always focus every activity and event on "the chilluns".  Always create a way in which "the chilluns" are being hurt.

Hate Trump.

Maximum use of dem party, universities, and MSM.  One new angle this time was to cry everywhere.

Rinse & Repeat, every day all day.

Yep that pretty much sums it up!

A perspective from history.
In 1648, almost four centuries ago, the Vatican promoted
the Treaty of Westphalia which ended the Thirty Years War.
A vital part of that Treaty defined 'Sovereign Right', an international
concept governing the movement of people across borders.
Its essence was that only the citizens of any nation/state, having
clearly defined/recognized borders, possess the right to decide
who can/cannot enter their country; as either a visitor or an
immigrant seeking permanent residence.
Has anyone heard anyone in media or politics even mention
Sovereign Right much less articulate it???
Isn't that reality, mute testament to the brainlessness of our time???
This entire issue reeks of pious platitudes, sanctimonious
malarkey and overwhelming bullshit; a stark reminder of the
assholery that we elect and re-elect to Congress.
Citizens get the governance they deserve and tolerate. !

Quote from: Bradleygreen3 on June 21, 2018, 05:48:22 AM
I agree i am sure that the cartels use kids, without a doubt but i'm sure not 100% of them. I am a believe that our government doesn't actually want to stop the cartels so that will never happen.

It is my Opinion after 25 years as a sworn Law Enforcement Officer, many of them as a investigator that many of our Politicians are in the employ of said Cartels, thats why they fight so hard for open borders and illegal immigrants, human trafficking being just one aspect of the cartels criminal enterprise. I am not alone in this surmise which includes former and Current LEO's.

Understand something...the Cartels OWN MEXICO, they own the Govt, they own the Military and the control ALL the Territory on the US/Mexico border. Nothing or No One comes or goes without their say so. For the past 12 years, a Narco terrorist WAR has been raging between differnt cartels for control of various lucrative areas. But rest assured that EVERYTHING, contraband, pirated CD's Trafficked Chidren, Cash, Drugs, guns, bootleg pills, stolen cars and goods are controlled by these criminal organizations.

Quote from: Billy's bayonet on June 21, 2018, 06:46:45 PM

It is my Opinion after 25 years as a sworn Law Enforcement Officer, many of them as a investigator that many of our Politicians are in the employ of said Cartels, thats why they fight so hard for open borders and illegal immigrants, human trafficking being just one aspect of the cartels criminal enterprise. I am not alone in this surmise which includes former and Current LEO's.

Understand something...the Cartels OWN MEXICO, they own the Govt, they own the Military and the control ALL the Territory on the US/Mexico border. Nothing or No One comes or goes without their say so. For the past 12 years, a Narco terrorist WAR has been raging between differnt cartels for control of various lucrative areas. But rest assured that EVERYTHING, contraband, pirated CD's Trafficked Chidren, Cash, Drugs, guns, bootleg pills, stolen cars and goods are controlled by these criminal organizations.

If the cartels buisness is being destroyed by trump then i fully expect an assasination attempt at some point.