Finished yesterday, uploaded last night. Only 4 minutes shorter, but a lot more visual aids to make this piece that is the length of a school lecture more useful and more busy.

Remember, the main purpose is not for those here who already understand the hoax but for tens of millions who need to hear this message. I am hoping that viewers here and youtube, wherever posted, will act as relay-agents to get the project out there. Even if those you share with only read the headline, to me that accomplishes plenty.

Give this one 3 minutes of your time. If it doesn't look more rhythmic and informative than the original, give up then. Or let's just talk about the great racism hoax foisted upon the world. I don't get notices for some reason but will check back in for replies now and again.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gBLD2rYo4Tc
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Quote from: Randal on August 23, 2017, 10:30:11 AM
Give this one 3 minutes of your time. If it doesn't look more rhythmic and informative than the original, give up then. Or let's just talk about the great racism hoax foisted upon the world. I don't get notices for some reason but will check back in for replies now and again.

Made it to the 1:30 mark and stopped.... sorry.  to be bluntly honest, the human brain listens and can comprehend faster than the average person actually speaks.   Like those players that can run at 1.25 ~ 2.0x the normal speed.   And, speaking as someone who also has a droning, boring tone - 1.25~1.50 speed with that voice is quite a noticeable improvement for listening.   

If you find Shawn Hannity boring from time to time, it's because he speaks at a pretty low grade level, and too slowly.   Mark Levin paces himself about the same, but speaks at a higher intellectual level, holding the listeners interest better.  Levin's books-on-tape are right on the edge of "focused listening", if you're new to it, you'll find yourself rewinding occasionally to understand what was said.

Images that move slowly, fading in slowly, etc., for an extended period of time - put me to sleep.

If I really wanted to rescue this thing.... I'd take the audio and bump up the speed, then put in relevant images - that support what's being said... a moment before it's actually said.  Sort of like Peter Fonda's technique in Easy Rider, flashing to the next scene, a couple of frames,  before actually taking you there.   He had an interesting technique for changing scenes, but understood the importance of keeping it moving & interesting.   Bringing the next slide in from a corner, overlaying the current slide is another way.  I'd be careful not to drive people crazy with trying to "be cool" though.

Quote from: Hoofer on August 23, 2017, 11:30:47 AM

If you find Shawn Hannity boring from time to time, it's because he speaks at a pretty low grade level, and too slowly.

And to think he is despite that limitation a much more effective communicator than me, better rhythm, memory, depth of knowledge. Could be your speedup thing would be useful in my case. Or just useful for a more limited audience, those who are okay hearing Dennis Prager types. Oh, I just remembered. The discussion does begin slowly even measuring by my own speed. So the tempo and variation do change and increase. That might still be a lower rate than wanted, however.

QuoteImages that move slowly, fading in slowly, etc., for an extended period of time - put me to sleep.

I am perhaps 20 years behind the current pace. The fast moving technique is even fine with me. I can take it much of the time for some period. Oh yeah, Stefan Molyneux is another example of long monologues that are slow, in his case widely in demand.

This could be my time for evaluating whether the problem is my own lack of a compelling presence, that in addition to being kind of lazy by avoiding the clip / comment / clip comment dominant news style. If the former, more impetus to avoid taking on these attempts to push a perspective out that the whole world (it seems to me) is getting wrong at the moment. Most people sit on their thoughts. I might be heading that way after a time of trying out whether my participation would be useful.

Quotethen put in relevant images - that support what's being said... a moment before it's actually said.  Sort of like Peter Fonda's technique in Easy Rider, flashing to the next scene, a couple of frames, 

Definitely a useful style. I forgot about it. In music, I think that's called syncopation

QuoteBringing the next slide in from a corner, overlaying the current slide is another way.

That one is included in the video. But if unable to pull viewers beyond 90 seconds with that part even already containing some nice item motion, then you know. I will have to check out the up/down ratings at YouTube after a while. Mine tend to score real high, though with low view counts. That means they could be mercy votes. Thanks for the evaluation.

With all of that ground covered, the message in my commentary SHOULD be pushed into the public dialogue and for the most part has not been. I sure hope a person with natural talent gets the knowledge that exists in me and produces a palatable presentation taking on this crucial correcting of a 50-year lie about supposed white racism and another lie that has been hushing up an epidemic of BLACK racism. Somebody (Hannity, Limbaugh, Savage, Infowars) please make a series on the situation. Well, I do believe part of the idea is being heard today than in prior years. So the world might be getting there, realizing that we have been made dumb with propaganda about racial matters.

Quote from: Randal on August 23, 2017, 10:30:11 AM
Finished yesterday, uploaded last night. Only 4 minutes shorter, but a lot more visual aids to make this piece that is the length of a school lecture more useful and more busy.

Remember, the main purpose is not for those here who already understand the hoax but for tens of millions who need to hear this message. I am hoping that viewers here and youtube, wherever posted, will act as relay-agents to get the project out there. Even if those you share with only read the headline, to me that accomplishes plenty.

Give this one 3 minutes of your time. If it doesn't look more rhythmic and informative than the original, give up then. Or let's just talk about the great racism hoax foisted upon the world. I don't get notices for some reason but will check back in for replies now and again.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gBLD2rYo4Tc
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OK Randal, I too attempted a few minutes, and like Hoofer, I too found myself actually saying the words before you spoke them.
You have the voice for this, but, you just haven't any cadence, I could probably say what you say in the video and do it in 10 minutes total, and I'm basing this on the first ten minutes,  which could easily be cut to a minute and a half if you just took out all the pauses, and's, and ummms between words and eliminated a lot of unnecessary wording.
Cut to the facts, people don't care about your "Feelings" nor do they like when a point is reiterated using different words to describe your point three differing ways.

Case in point, "Smaller operations....that. are..still...carrying the same deceit....daily, so what I am talking about are abc, nbc, cbs...the formerly...three..go..to...places....for..national news.....every night.....7..nights..a..week.
And..they were lying back then.....60...70s......the 80s...
All of the ..... are pauses, these lose an audience faster than a test pattern. I'd suggest you write out what you want to say, practice speeding up your cadence drop listing all the networks, simplify with Leftist media. You list the history, and that's fine, but you sound distracted while saying it, which is just what your audience will be doing if you can't get to your point much sooner.

When making a point, it's best to tell your audience in short what your point is, then quickly make your case, or they're gone.
EG. 'The leftist media has had a choke hold on Americans opinions for decades, it wasn't until the internet came along, that we were able to break that stranglehold and fight back'. See how quick that went? You don't have to "feel" like you are\ getting an emotional point across, that takes care of it's own self.
Most people are aware of this, only an idiot would think otherwise, and they aren't your target audience.

I'm not trying to make you feel bad, I actually want you to succeed in getting out your message.
Ever listened to the guy on PBS that did "Lake Woe Be Gone"?
I listened once, never tuned back in, and if you've never heard of him, do a search, you'll see what I'm talking about.

You could always go to a media blog and get some tips there, maybe?

Quote from: Solar on August 23, 2017, 01:25:07 PM

You have the voice for this, but, you just haven't any cadence, I could probably say what you say in the video and do it in 10 minutes total, and I'm basing this on the first ten minutes,  which could easily be cut to a minute and a half

Yeah, you guys have convinced me. The thing you're talking about pertains probably to my brain rather than a style that could be adjusted. Some are suggesting that I have Asperger's, a mildish though still significant form of autism. Defective brain. So maybe just give up on this form of expression. I am not all that great in real life either.

But what to do with, what would you suggest for, getting an important message into the national conversation because others are missing this one? Is it something you might take on or know of anyone else? Maybe I should just sit back longer until the idea grows on its own. Some other things I said in video already or wanted to say because others were not covering the material well if at all have been growing more common. Just wait longer? Yeah, maybe so.

Did you know the message already, per chance, that the whole whitey is racist narrative has been pure garbage since the beginning, that in reality blacks are 8x more racist than whites? That only Democrats owned slaves, founded the Klan, that only 5% of African slavers were brought to the US? That's the stuff I want out there, mostly the first one.

It kind of sucks having all this passion and some weapons of knowledge for getting in the fight while lacking the skills to get much of anything done.

Quote from: Randal on August 23, 2017, 04:31:35 PM
Yeah, you guys have convinced me. The thing you're talking about pertains probably to my brain rather than a style that could be adjusted. Some are suggesting that I have Asperger's, a mildish though still significant form of autism. Defective brain. So maybe just give up on this form of expression. I am not all that great in real life either.

But what to do with, what would you suggest for, getting an important message into the national conversation because others are missing this one? Is it something you might take on or know of anyone else? Maybe I should just sit back longer until the idea grows on its own. Some other things I said in video already or wanted to say because others were not covering the material well if at all have been growing more common. Just wait longer? Yeah, maybe so.

Did you know the message already, per chance, that the whole whitey is racist narrative has been pure garbage since the beginning, that in reality blacks are 8x more racist than whites? That only Democrats owned slaves, founded the Klan, that only 5% of African slavers were brought to the US? That's the stuff I want out there, mostly the first one.

It kind of sucks having all this passion and some weapons of knowledge for getting in the fight while lacking the skills to get much of anything done.

Hmm..
Don't give up there is a lot on the net that can help you.  You have the passion and knowledge all you need to do is hone your skills. 

Quote from: Randal on August 23, 2017, 04:31:35 PM
Yeah, you guys have convinced me. The thing you're talking about pertains probably to my brain rather than a style that could be adjusted. Some are suggesting that I have Asperger's, a mildish though still significant form of autism. Defective brain. So maybe just give up on this form of expression. I am not all that great in real life either.

But what to do with, what would you suggest for, getting an important message into the national conversation because others are missing this one? Is it something you might take on or know of anyone else? Maybe I should just sit back longer until the idea grows on its own. Some other things I said in video already or wanted to say because others were not covering the material well if at all have been growing more common. Just wait longer? Yeah, maybe so.

Did you know the message already, per chance, that the whole whitey is racist narrative has been pure garbage since the beginning, that in reality blacks are 8x more racist than whites? That only Democrats owned slaves, founded the Klan, that only 5% of African slavers were brought to the US? That's the stuff I want out there, mostly the first one.

It kind of sucks having all this passion and some weapons of knowledge for getting in the fight while lacking the skills to get much of anything done.

Randal, a few notes.

a.  There is no "Killer Story" just waiting to be told, not with this huge number of media outlets, it's already been done.
b.  Just when you think you've got a news flash, by the time you actually compile the facts and make a compelling case, someone else usually has beaten you to the press...  get use to that..
c.  Brevity is the soul of wit.   The Readers Digest version gets read more than the unabridged version.   Bored people read it all, busy people scan & move on.   Just be aware of that 'fact' if you write L-O-N-G like I do...
d.  An entertaining piece will get read over anything else, even if it's far from an interesting subject.  My kids discovered a technical service manual for Gas Appliances, and read it, cover to cover - the author was hilarious.
e.  Timing can be the sole arbitrator of success, no matter what the subject.   Which is why it's wise to be working on 3-4 or more "projects" at the same time.  When one looks like it's getting hot, you've already done the basic research - just throw meat-on-da-bones, add a little humor, and let it go.
f.  Trends are cyclical - they always repeat themselves, keep a good library, never throw away your work or references.  Stuff I wrote decades ago (and quite poorly) is suddenly relevant... go figure?   Proof is Hollywood remaking movies.   How many versions of "Robin Hood" are there?  5?  7?  Ben Hur and the Magnificent Seven were remakes.
g.  The use of "Straw Men" to make a point is the sign of a weak intellectual argument.  Most of Barak Obama's speeches relied on obscure  positions - but his cadence was mesmerizing, did that mean he was smart - or a huckster trying to sell an idea that would 'fly' with any reasonable person?
h.  Don't make excuses for your 'misfires' and 'failures' - unless it's really yours.    I'm not at the top, but can recognize a guy who can "turn a phrase" with "biting wit & hilarity" - the old newspaper guys are the best - even if you don't agree with them.   Think Paul Harvey, he had a bunch of writers & researchers...  It's all learned the hard way, we all make mistakes.
i.  Read, read, read.   Watching TV dulls the mind, reading enhances the mind.  I think TV is probably 3-4th grade level communication, good books are probably 10th grade level.... it takes 'work' to read and comprehend a good book - but afterwards, you *know* you're smarter.
j.  The gift of "Gab" is a prerequisite for a Preacher.  Without it, it's all academic.  Even that can be "learned".  Try it - could you speak for 1hour, a one-way-conversation and hold an audience, without any input from a caller (think Levin, Limbaugh), or would you wind up talking in circles (Hannity & Beck).

Just my opinion - as Clint Eastwood said, "A man has got to know his limitations".   That's where you stop -or- start.

Quote from: Randal on August 23, 2017, 04:31:35 PM
Yeah, you guys have convinced me. The thing you're talking about pertains probably to my brain rather than a style that could be adjusted. Some are suggesting that I have Asperger's, a mildish though still significant form of autism. Defective brain. So maybe just give up on this form of expression. I am not all that great in real life either.

But what to do with, what would you suggest for, getting an important message into the national conversation because others are missing this one? Is it something you might take on or know of anyone else? Maybe I should just sit back longer until the idea grows on its own. Some other things I said in video already or wanted to say because others were not covering the material well if at all have been growing more common. Just wait longer? Yeah, maybe so.

Did you know the message already, per chance, that the whole whitey is racist narrative has been pure garbage since the beginning, that in reality blacks are 8x more racist than whites? That only Democrats owned slaves, founded the Klan, that only 5% of African slavers were brought to the US? That's the stuff I want out there, mostly the first one.

It kind of sucks having all this passion and some weapons of knowledge for getting in the fight while lacking the skills to get much of anything done.

LOL! Every person on the planet has some sort of defect/genius and that's what makes us individuals.
But FWIW, what you say is not being told, simply isn't true, over the last seven years this forum has talked in depth about every issue known to man and politics.
take the time to search the forum, you'll find every topic you can think of, just do me a favor, don't flood the forum with old threads by commenting on them, try and keep it to a low roar if you feel compelled to bring one or two forward.

Quote from: Solar on August 23, 2017, 05:57:13 PM
LOL! Every person on the planet has some sort of defect/genius and that's what makes us individuals.

You are missing information on Aspergers. It's really different than an "everyone has a thing" idea. People know it soon as a person with the condition begins talking. While some exhibit smarter than average abilities, the severe below average aspects of the autism person make for a continual limitation. Worse are the years before figuring out that the problem was me, not everyone else.

QuoteBut FWIW, what you say is not being told, simply isn't true, over the last seven years this forum has talked in depth about every issue known to man and politics.

This forum is tiny. Plus forum conversations are just that. I wanted an actual product that could be posted and shared. I will go further in expressing doubt that anyone until now has ever called the accepted history of racism in American a complete hoax like done here. I am a news junkie and one who tunes into the big racism discussion as well.

Sean Hannity, Alex Jones and others do cover the lack of reporting black crimes WHEN racist black violence occurs in a huge way and goes unreported elsewhere. But Hannity at least remained even as of yesterday railing on white nationalism, white supremacy, concepts that DO NOT EXIST other than by perhaps 1 in a million people. Moreover, BLACK SUPREMACY is everywhere and APPROVED by the lib media.

So I remain unable to find anyone reaching a wide audience that has touched this concept beyond merely dancing around the edges. If you can show me otherwise, I will redirect my efforts toward promoting that work rather than this failed attempt.

Thanks for the perspective.

Quote from: Randal on August 24, 2017, 09:40:48 AM
You are missing information on Aspergers. It's really different than an "everyone has a thing" idea. People know it soon as a person with the condition begins talking. While some exhibit smarter than average abilities, the severe below average aspects of the autism person make for a continual limitation. Worse are the years before figuring out that the problem was me, not everyone else.

No, I understand it's maladies quite well, I have a family member struggling with it, but he's still smart as a whip. As I said, we all have issues, it's how one makes it work for them that makes the difference.
We even had a member severely handicapped with Aspergers, he is literally socially handicapped, but again, quite intelligent.

QuoteThis forum is tiny. Plus forum conversations are just that. I wanted an actual product that could be posted and shared. I will go further in expressing doubt that anyone until now has ever called the accepted history of racism in American a complete hoax like done here. I am a news junkie and one who tunes into the big racism discussion as well.

Just because only a few, very bright Conservatives post here, is in no way evidence that this is in anyway a small forum, based on our following of readers, and the fact that we're rated in the top three in the Nation of Conservative forums.

QuoteSean Hannity, Alex Jones and others do cover the lack of reporting black crimes WHEN racist black violence occurs in a huge way and goes unreported elsewhere. But Hannity at least remained even as of yesterday railing on white nationalism, white supremacy, concepts that DO NOT EXIST other than by perhaps 1 in a million people. Moreover, BLACK SUPREMACY is everywhere and APPROVED by the lib media.

See, this may be one of your failings, focusing on racial issues. Conservatives know there really isn't a race p[problem in the country, that's a leftist created illusion supported by the left and their media.
Sure, there's cesspits all around the country full of slums, mostly located in large cities run by the left, who continue to keep black families in bondage via govt subsidies.
All of which was started by LBJ and the breaking up of the black nuclear family.

QuoteSo I remain unable to find anyone reaching a wide audience that has touched this concept beyond merely dancing around the edges. If you can show me otherwise, I will redirect my efforts toward promoting that work rather than this failed attempt.

Thanks for the perspective.

So yeah, coming to a Conservative forum preaching hate simply falls on deaf ears, we recognize the problem for what it is, a leftist issue and focus our efforts accordingly.

Quote from: Hoofer on August 23, 2017, 05:31:26 PM

Just my opinion - as Clint Eastwood said, "A man has got to know his limitations".   That's where you stop -or- start.

I have been discovering my limitations in recent years. The idea of making a video like this is not in expectation that oratorical skills from me are going to make it go viral. It is more an attempt by one of those ordinary humans wanting to help, get in the battle in a war we have been losing for decades while gifted preachers never bother arming the congregations, while even Limbaugh goes way too light on the power of darkness flooding the land.

Knowing some of my shortages, I reached the point of only speaking up like in this video when nobody found out there is covering the ground burning in me. That is what you see, a weak effort by a regular or lesser guy to say, hey, could we talk about THIS for a minute! It may be though that I should sit this war out, simply cheering on those getting the work done, adding a forum comment here and there to help another regular person. Know your limitations. That sounds like the new level of recognition for me.

Thanks for the detailed syllabus. I lack wit and some other qualities that it seems to me either come natural or forget about it. So venturing into a training regimen for public speaking would be in my case wasting time. Back to the forums, I think.

Quote from: Solar on August 24, 2017, 10:07:31 AM
No, I understand it's maladies quite well, I have a family member struggling with it, but he's still smart as a whip. As I said, we all have issues, it's how one makes it work for them that makes the difference.

How we got here was about personal qualities in me in contrast to your suggestion that I wold be better off doing the whole commentary 10x faster. We are in agreement that far. I merely added that getting up to proper tempo was unlikely for anyone operating at my rhythm.

QuoteJust because only a few, very bright Conservatives post here, is in no way evidence that this is in anyway a small forum,

Maybe I should have been more precise. The comparison in my mind was to people like Mark Dice who gets like 30,000 views within an hour or so after posting a video. Never going to have that level of impact at any forum or anything in the same county on most forums.

QuoteSee, this may be one of your failings, focusing on racial issues. Conservatives know there really isn't a race p[problem in the country, that's a leftist created illusion supported by the left and their media.

I had the dumb idea that people like you who already know the truth might want another weapon for sharing with those who lack the information. But you might already possess an arsenal to pull out when dealing with a liberal or just a normal person lacking knowledge on the topic.

QuoteSo yeah, coming to a Conservative forum preaching hate simply falls on deaf ears, we recognize the problem for what it is, a leftist issue and focus our efforts accordingly.

Like how do you focus your efforts? I am curious.

Quote from: Randal on August 25, 2017, 02:58:31 PM
How we got here was about personal qualities in me in contrast to your suggestion that I wold be better off doing the whole commentary 10x faster. We are in agreement that far. I merely added that getting up to proper tempo was unlikely for anyone operating at my rhythm.

Maybe I should have been more precise. The comparison in my mind was to people like Mark Dice who gets like 30,000 views within an hour or so after posting a video. Never going to have that level of impact at any forum or anything in the same county on most forums.

Pffft, 30.000? That's spit.
So far, August alone we had (August 1179868) views, and this is our slow time, meaning nearly every new thread gets read that much in a month.

QuoteI had the dumb idea that people like you who already know the truth might want another weapon for sharing with those who lack the information. But you might already possess an arsenal to pull out when dealing with a liberal or just a normal person lacking knowledge on the topic.

Like how do you focus your efforts? I am curious.

See, that's the thing, Conservatives, by our very nature care nothing about race, we focus on equality, that alone, disarms racist simply because we refuse to fall to their level.
We focus on our Founding ideals of Liberty and equality for all.
To even fall for the bait of leftists, means you're validating their lies, in the process giving them just one more podium to spew hate.

Believe me, I get your ire, I was once focused on race too, but only because I grew up in a racist area full of LBJ transplants from the torn down Chicago Projects under the 235 leftist housing plan, where they literally bussed them out to Ca and gave them free housing in brand new neighborhoods, instantly devaluing the properties surrounding them.

Every third new home built had to be a 235 planned home, and these weren't your run of the mill intact nuclear families, they were generational Govt teat suckers that expected everything for free, and with it came heavy crime and racism.
So yeah, I get it, but if you focus all your energy on combatting something you have no control over, it'll eat you alive, which is why I changed my entire philosophy and looked at it for what it is, a Marxist created issue designed to divide America.

So let the racists rot away, don't give them the satisfaction of dragging you down to their level. Stop acknowledging their hate!

Quote from: Randal on August 25, 2017, 02:58:31 PM
How we got here was about personal qualities in me in contrast to your suggestion that I wold be better off doing the whole commentary 10x faster. We are in agreement that far. I merely added that getting up to proper tempo was unlikely for anyone operating at my rhythm.

It's not engaging.  I tried to listen but tried to hang myself after 15 seconds.

Quote
Maybe I should have been more precise. The comparison in my mind was to people like Mark Dice who gets like 30,000 views within an hour or so after posting a video. Never going to have that level of impact at any forum or anything in the same county on most forums.

He gets that many views not because of pace.

Quote
I had the dumb idea that people like you who already know the truth might want another weapon for sharing with those who lack the information. But you might already possess an arsenal to pull out when dealing with a liberal or just a normal person lacking knowledge on the topic.

I'm not trying to dampen your spirit, but I'd go back to the drawing board.  Take your picture off to and maybe slide show in some charts/images/or something....  Just for kicks, speed your dialog up 2x... there should be an option for that on your software...  that way you can just talk at your pace but it gets kicked up a notch...

Quote from: taxed on August 29, 2017, 03:30:04 PM
It's not engaging.  I tried to listen but tried to hang myself after 15 seconds.
He gets that many views not because of pace.
I'm not trying to dampen your spirit, but I'd go back to the drawing board.  Take your picture off to and maybe slide show in some charts/images/or something....  Just for kicks, speed your dialog up 2x... there should be an option for that on your software...  that way you can just talk at your pace but it gets kicked up a notch...

Hell that would cut the video by half the time alone.