Wrote a pro-american song and wanted some feedback....thanks

link below!1!1!!!

in the song benny stands for america!


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5EtYPrsm35g

Quote from: steve folkster on May 09, 2015, 02:40:43 PM
Wrote a pro-american song and wanted some feedback....thanks

link below!1!1!!!

in the song benny stands for america!


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5EtYPrsm35g

Hmm...
Even with 8.000$ hearing aids I could only hear less the half of your words. 

Quote from: steve folkster on May 09, 2015, 02:40:43 PM
Wrote a pro-american song and wanted some feedback....thanks

You're not too far away from being polished and pertinent.  The tune is hook-worthy, but needs some dimensional breathing-space. 

Can you elaborate?

Should I create a sequence in between verses?


Benny in the song is a welfare reciever asking god to loan him money.  God said such a mentality is for the devil.

Thats the core of the song.

Just that you needed to mike your guitar separately, then blend both recordings on a third unit.